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Literature Text
It appears
We all contain an ounce
Of disobedience
Even if it means opposing
Something as simple
As a rule.
You did it
Right then.
Probably without noticing.
Curious
Is it not?
The human mind.
After all
Rules are meant to be
Broken -
Even poetic
Conventions; the free verse.
From it, we can discover
More.
That is the essence
Of human nature;
Of humanity.
We all contain an ounce
Of disobedience
Even if it means opposing
Something as simple
As a rule.
You did it
Right then.
Probably without noticing.
Curious
Is it not?
The human mind.
After all
Rules are meant to be
Broken -
Even poetic
Conventions; the free verse.
From it, we can discover
More.
That is the essence
Of human nature;
Of humanity.
I got you 
Just for fun, hope you had a laugh, or maybe the deep message got to you?
Just for fun, hope you had a laugh, or maybe the deep message got to you?
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Well, I tried to bend the rules by reading the poem in just hovering my cursor over the preview text. I read the entirety of the poem without clicking (smugly enough), but in wanting to comment (I clicked the 'comments' text below the notification, hoping to by-pass the actual deviation) I was sent to this page regardless.
My endeavour to find the loophole was unsuccessful, it seems.
But at least I managed to read the text without clicking, hehe.
A wonderful poem regardless. ^^
My endeavour to find the loophole was unsuccessful, it seems.
But at least I managed to read the text without clicking, hehe.A wonderful poem regardless. ^^